This is cleaner and more legible...so it is an improvement over the first version.. I'd love to be able to sit with you to tighten it up even more... We can get more inventive with how words relate to one another and how to set up a rhythm through consistent line spacing and the use of margins and sight lines....
This is cleaner and more legible...so it is an improvement over the first version.. I'd love to be able to sit with you to tighten it up even more... We can get more inventive with how words relate to one another and how to set up a rhythm through consistent line spacing and the use of margins and sight lines....
ReplyDeleteThat would be great. Thank you Professor Nevins.
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